you're love is surely true.. seriously, this was wonderful...

That was really nice. wonderful poem. u hav expressed the love so beautifully.
take care, bharti

Wow, that was wonderful. I mean wonderful.
and I liked this part the best:
Are you mine?
Is my destiny about to shine?
When you do embrace
I can’t believe my fate

wish you the best,
marjan

Thanks for the comment...i certainly love this poem it seems so loving and to whom ever it's written for is very lucky :) nice job!!!

Hmm, ok, it's a good poem, but unfortunately, few might actually read it n leave comment on it, cause well, it's in the slang poem category? N i hev no idea y u even put it under the category, I don't c any slang words here, do u? I think it fits best in love or life, juz not slang, most of the poets here r critical, n they tend 2 skip slang poems, cause it juz something they doesn't like 2 c...well, juz giving u an advice, since it's an Awesome poem, would like it if others get 2 c it 2....sorry if I offended u, that's all I got 2 say...still, continue writing, ur work r amazing...

It is SSoooooooo sweet.

A great deep poem. true love is a great thing and the feelings it provides are so wonderfully described in this poem. Will be reading more