I love it. Thanks for the dedication! I hope you will get a LOT of poems, so i can comment on every one of them.
~Stevie~

Good poem, and Thanx for the comment.

Good poem, keep writing!

love mark xxx

Last line, would sound bether if you split it in half
I love you
but now it's time for me to go

great...excellent...i like it .....later

-Jesus-

I agree about the last line

it would make it even better :)

Good poem.

Aww,c ome on cheer up, be happy! hehe
well good poem~!
peace