hey nah it doesnt really suck its ok..o0o hope you dont get mad lol...

Awesome poem

this was very good. i liked it. you didnt have to repeat the who am i as much..but its still good. thx for commenting on my bro's poem :D he's a comment who^e i tell yuh
~*Freak*~

Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

I red all of your poems and they were great keep up the good work your very talented

This poem is really good, so don't say that it sucks. 5/5