Awesome, keep it up, Finish Finish!! its perfect, keep going

That's a really good poem!

-However can I make a suggestion? The way it's written makes it a bit hard to read, I think a poem flows more when it's in lines not in like sentances-

But overall FANTASTIC!!!!

-Lyd

P.S Thank you so much for the comment you made on my mirror of sadness poem!

I added you as a favourite!

KEEP WRITING WELL

:D

-Lyd

it needs to rhyme more, but it was good

nice keep working on it the flow is nice and it look like it will be really good when your done