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  • 18 years ago

    by Mj

    good poem. i can see you really mean what you write. xox

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Very good poem sammy. You are really progressing as a poet, and it's blowing me away :)
    Much love,
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by Krete

    poetry is the best vent for the soul.

    like the eyes being the window, the heart being the willow, the fingers being the initial - all is being scraped away.

    *Love the ending quotes ... you are particular how you right. I like this attitude. Kudos.

    5/5