I really loved it..it was really great. but maybe, you could try and work on the last line. it didn't really seem to fit in..but other wise, this was a very beautiful poem.

Great poem xxxx

Lol! Perfect place to write the poem then. I dunno about "Angels are human"...similar maybe but...

I haven't got the time to read all of your poems yet but I will browse through more of them later 5/5 on this one because I really like how it is worded...how you wrote it and such is awesome. Much love lady---

gee i love your poems they are so good, and i love storms lol but i think your very very good at this keep up the good work,

love ,
~*~Gianna~*~