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  • 18 years ago

    by LOST iN LOVE

    this was a great poem!i really liked it!good job!
    xoxo
    <3JeSs

  • 18 years ago

    by Dead As Yesterday

    Really great poem you really decribed perfectly the transition from childhood into adulthood good on you!!
    5/5
    Dave.....

  • 18 years ago

    by allison

    Good hidden messages. you have a way or wrritng that you don't plainly put things out for us to read, but you twist them in for us to think about. great!
    Love Always
    Allison

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    That's good. Revisit it in a few more year and you will find that your outlook will have chaged yet again. As we all get older our views on life change from our different experiences as we go through different phases. Good write.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    Awesome job! That is very beautiful and wonderfully written. It's very true to life and I can definitely relate. Keep up the good work and take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    gee im like a pesimist and ur like a obtimist. :p i dont comunicate my real life with my family and the only really really super allways understanding me friends i have r online.....yey me..good poem though. 5