I enjoyed your poem, it was worthwhile reading. When you get the chance, please read my latest poem "Set Me Free"... I would really appreciate it. BYE! (Plz rate/comment)

the last 3-4 lines were killer loved ur work

awsome. that is a great poem and soo true which makes it sad u r a great poet and i would really appriciate it i f u cheked out my poems-thx def keep up the great work!

Goodnight father, and sleep I will,
But first I have something to ask,
Those colored folk that you speak of,
Are they not us behind a mask?

That was so awesome!!! I agree with that so much!! Those last few words gave me chills!
Wonderful Job and please keep it up!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

A truly meaningiful and inspiring piece of writing, very well written. Excellent!

Regards,

Steve

Goodnight father, and sleep I will,
But first I have something to ask,
Those colored folk that you speak of,
Are they not us behind a mask?

wow, very good poem. I loved it
specially the ending.
It was so true.
take care,
marjan