Comments : Goodnight Prejudice

  • 14 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    I enjoyed your poem, it was worthwhile reading. When you get the chance, please read my latest poem "Set Me Free"... I would really appreciate it. BYE! (Plz rate/comment)

  • 14 years ago

    by charmed

    the last 3-4 lines were killer loved ur work

  • 14 years ago

    by kat

    awsome. that is a great poem and soo true which makes it sad u r a great poet and i would really appriciate it i f u cheked out my poems-thx def keep up the great work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Goodnight father, and sleep I will,
    But first I have something to ask,
    Those colored folk that you speak of,
    Are they not us behind a mask?

    That was so awesome!!! I agree with that so much!! Those last few words gave me chills!
    Wonderful Job and please keep it up!
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 14 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    A truly meaningiful and inspiring piece of writing, very well written. Excellent!

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 14 years ago

    by Marjan

    Goodnight father, and sleep I will,
    But first I have something to ask,
    Those colored folk that you speak of,
    Are they not us behind a mask?

    wow, very good poem. I loved it
    specially the ending.
    It was so true.
    take care,
    marjan