These poems are so creative I really like them. They remind me of "The Lady of Shallot", for some reason. Anyway keep writing I love reading your work.
~anne~

Very interesting poem... SOunds more of like a fairy tale story, but the flow is really great (has nothing to do with commas, mind you). It's very rare to find a story-like poem on here anymore.

~Ciao LyMtAb Lipton

yea! happy ending! that's really good, daniel...where did you come up with all that?

Awesome poem! Absolutly love it!

Wiked that was so long but its great im guna add u to my favourites