I enjoyed your poem, it was worthwhile reading. When you get the chance, please read my latest poem "Set Me Free"... I would really appreciate it. BYE!

that was good, the flow was a little choppy but it was good. I really liked and understood the message, and i really ejoyed it becuause its not just another love poem blah blahblha i love you, blahblhablah do you love me too? etc etc.... great job.
4/5