I like this poem, you have that type of writting that makes you see things in reality. I find that it gets other peoples perspections in mind about what life is, or what it should be.

(p.s. thanks for commenting on my poems^_^)

No I actualli reli like it its light to read and keeps u interested keep it up 5/5 plz comment and vote on some of mine

Hey, I voted just like you asked! Keep on writing you're pretty good, try some new techniques and write about something new, I've got a whole genre of poems and you can too! Have fun and WRITE!!!

wow i feel so bad compared to u... lol but thank u so much for commenting on my first poem and giving it a 5 too! u have no clue how good that makes me feel!

once again thanks again!

Laura Elizabeth

omgsh thanks so much again! idk this is like the coolest thing ever! i just like being able to express myself thru this kinda stuff ya kno? lol well thanks again u have no clue how much ur comments mean to me right now!

You write about what you see, hear or think...you are a very physical writer, it seems- much like all of us on this site. Don't be afraid to broaden your horizons on topics, and never be afraid to experiment! Keep writing. Thanks for your comment on my poem " My Creed"

love always,
Lyndsey

thats really good!

Good poem you have raised some good issues keep it up!

take care

i'm with yah on this one, its seems like people are really greedy these days that all that matters is how much money they have in there pockets. i go to a school where all the rich kids in are town have complete control and can get away with any thing cuz there parents have money. i love this poem its true keep writing and expressing how you feel.