Comments : Last Word's

  • 18 years ago

    by Amba

    Heart ache sucks so bad i no! but you hang in there! i hope everything turns out for the best for you!
    5/5
    xox Bam
    nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    Good Poem, I like the writing and the flow.. except this one line feels a little forced.. I'd say something to change your mind

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    Ok i'll work on that bit too!!! you are most probably right!!!