Comments : Trusting Hands

  • 18 years ago

    by writer girl

    wow, emotion all over in that one...great job.
    -kk-

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessy

    I love this poem its sad but i totally touched me....And when you were saying about your boyfriend and how sometimes you wished you killed him....I thought about killing my ex to for breaking my heart but then i stop and think One of my loves already got killed from me and It changes the veiw....Knowing you new the person that got killed is really big pain....So you might wanna kill him but when he dies your veiw will change and if your anything like me you will wanna take his place just so he can live the life he needed and wanted...Yes i wrote that butterfly poem it made my cry lol and i wrote it!!!! well 5/5 love the poem