this is soo good.. a great start.. with a strong ending.. keep writing..

I like it:) It reminds me of the way that you feel after you've cried too much...kind of exilarated?

*thumbs up*

Thanks for the comment. your poem is really god. You said in my comment that you finally realize how serious cutting is. I'm glad you did, becuase cutting is such a huge problem that many people misunderstand. I hope your friend can get help with it. One way to really help her, is to just be there for her, and listen to her. That really helps me.

I norm can't stand poems that rhyme...bu idk wha it is bout dis one that makes me like it so much...