goodness!! that was really really good. i really liked it!

Loved it....
*loved u wit all my heart,
u just popped it wit the dart*
this are my favorite lines...it just popped out at me...

~Sandra~

Liked the poem n what it said!! but ur structure is a bit dodgey!! u could try havin breaks inbetween lines! Liked it anyway! keep them comin! 5/5