Comments : A confused abused heart

  • 18 years ago

    by AnorexicDream

    hey sweetie! this is an amazing poem. i love u so much keep up the great work.
    love always and forever and more
    amanda

    to my lover
    from ur lover

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Wow! i almost cried reading this poem. Its so sad...
    Very well written on the other hand though.
    btw you misspelled for in this paragraph...

    she screamed fro help
    but never asked
    and all she felt
    ended the day she couldn't last

    5/5 anyways. It was good.