Wonderfully written. The entire poem is powerful, but the first stanza hooked me. I love it.

Laura I just LOVED how you ended this poem! That was amzing I see why its a favorite

Thank you so much for letting me know about this poem, it is great. i like it.5/5
and yeah after reading your poems you made it to my favorite list.

This poem is so sweet, and kind of sad...=( I really liked it, specially the first stanza...so lovely. I also liked the ending, because you said:

One day we met by fate and this could be our only chance

That's so beautiful.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

OK my first comment...it cut me off...i had a big comment for you a didnt realize it had done that..sorry! could thing i read again

Laura, i have told you before that what I love most about your poems is your choice of words...you pick rhymes that we dont normally see on PnQ and thats a great change for some of the readers that read your work! In the second stanza I found some of your sentences to be really long...but i thought about pointing it out or not because I kind of like it, then again it seems distracting since you have a quick flowing poem then a long stanza....BUT i dont think you should change it because again, i loved your choice of words!

Amazing write woman! i love you poems!