woooo! SO true hunni! wicked poem, reminds me of a certain ex bf of mine... lol. 5/5 hun, its great! :) Rach x

amazing, great pace, great rhythm, great rhyme, overall an excellent write,

ellie xxx

great write. i love the last thought at the end of the poem. flows perfectly. keep them comin :)

luv lu -x-x-x-

You left me for her,
And you cheated on me,
How I felt back then,
Now you finally see.

thats great this whole story the exact thing happened to me, great work cant believe i didn't read b4 xox fallen

This was an AMAZING poem...

im having writers block right now so theres no new poems yet but i think im getting over it because i wrote some rhymes last night so you can check my new ones out in like a week or so haha!

Hi
again how true...
it was a great poem
keep'em comin

Wooohooo...thats mine kind of poem lol.. its kinda like BAM! take that lol...

this reminds me of my ex..he did the exact same thing to me and then the girl he cheated on me with ,cheated on him..

so yeah..great job.5/5