Comments : Over mountains and oceans

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    very nice poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    that was really beautiful, I'm so sorry I wasn't there with you to wipe away the tears, but I am here now, and I want to always be here for you, I love you so much, the poem was wonderful, brought tears to my eyes, I love you more than anything, you are my life and I dont know what I'd do without you, you are my best friend, and more :).. so glad you are home, missed you so very much, cant wait to see you and hold you tomorrow.. counting down the hours.. I love you

    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    this is a really good poem! i love the idea of it. so sd and beautifully put, well done!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 18 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    your an awesome writer
    nice write
    Unloved ♥

    btw I ♥ Davey Havok too!!

    ♥Davey♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Dianna M Tuohy

    Nice job ^.^ I adore the descriptions!