Oh I really like this poem. It flows so nicley and is very sensual. keep up the good work

That's hott. Not what you're goin through, but your poem. Very good.

beautiful, this is a really good poem
all of your poems are good, and meaningful, o' and it doesn't matter wut other ppl think of your poetry all that matters is that you like it. =)
thanks for the comment, it was very much appreciated.
Always,
-Kit

thanx everyone

yeah my poems do mean something to me
but i kinda just wanted to know if there were good from someone elses view thats all
thanx tho

i like it