oh wow, i didnt know you to write so profoundly. this one i like. thanks for writing again!!! cause no one else is!!! grr.... but anyways, just a question, why was i remember when posted as a slang poem?

BELLA!!! i love it!! thats my cousin, y'all!!! rockin, i really liked this one!! good rhyme scheme!! keep it up.

Wow,
This was really deep, i really liked it, you have so much talent..and at such a young age, keep it up
Ashley