Comments : Suicide!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Very deep and meaningfull life. Sent shivers down my spine reading it, sending a true message to every reader. I liked the way you underlined your point in the end, great peice of work. Kind regards from Kane

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley_LOVES_Jason

    i think you said everything i could say. i tried suicide once and ill never do it agian. my story is similar to yours. my boyfriend saved me and now we have a baby i couldnt imagine my life without her in it. never feel like someones not there for you cause somewhere someone IS thinking of you. im here if u ever need to talk to someone im_tickled_pink692yahoo.com
    ~*~Ashley~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    I haev tried to commit suicide.. but you know what you haev no idea what it is like to be the only one with the problems like mine! you have no idea what its like to be me so take your peom and shove it because life isn't all peachy-keen and there are things i dont want to deal with and i do show all my emotions so!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    Shut-up.. I dont do patterns and "Ryhmes" Not all poems are like that.. like at hykou its doesn't rhyme