Comments : One last time

  • 18 years ago

    by Bianca

    I LUV IT!!!!! It's scary to know that they are actually girls out there who this! I hope that's never me!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Yep I can see where you have been going with this. Two rhymes per line right? Good idea. Carried off fairly well and on a subject often discussed today on forums. Have you noticed it’s never discussed on the news...or even out loud...like its taboo or something. Anyways I like your poem so I will stop whittling on now. X

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    hey.. OMG i love this poem.. also another good onee... what else is there to say..=]