Comments : The girl who died from being teased

  • 18 years ago

    by AnorexicDream

    i love this poem sweetie.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    OMG i loved this poem, it just flows and its sad too.. I <333 it :] mk..
    simply amazing.

    <3Emma

    Ohh yes, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by foreverhappy

    That poem is so sad. I think it touches me because i am that girl and its getting to that point. Good poem though. real strong emotion..

  • 18 years ago

    by amy

    excelent...
    its a big issue and u covered it beautifully...
    it had a nice flow and was so sad...
    hope this isnt you
    always
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by LindaPham

    wow..... very sad what words can do to people great job! 5/5 keep writing

  • great poem. this is really good work. write more

  • great poem. this is really good work. write more

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffanie

    Great job..i cant say i cut or am that kindda girl in school but my sister is a cutter and shes that type of girl i mean she was hospitalized for it and everything..i have watched her hurt and come home cryin everyday cuz ppl pick on her and call her names.i have never had this problem cuz im refered to as the popular and preppy type i meani was in cheerleading and all but i know the hurt she suffers everyday..so to all of u who cut plzz go talk to someone and get help cuz u life means so much to people even though u dont realzie ..5/5 keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Thao Anh

    That was a really awesome poem. I have the same problems as that chick but i don't cut. 5/5 from me
    Asian Luv Alwayz

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    its so sad how mean people can be, and for no real reason either... so sad
    but this is a really good poem
    great job

  • 11 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    Beautiful 5/5, can relate in a different way.