Good, very good. I have just added you to my favorites. You are goood.

Very powerful, rather feel that physical pain than one of heartache. It’s quite descriptive and metaphorical. Great poem, I too added you as one of my favs. I'm sure I'll learn something from you. The necklace I assume from her lover, of whom seems to have left her in some way, was a major part in this poem. I guess she wants to be over her but can't seem to, even now, let go being so uncertain of what to believe now. Uh, based on the lines:

“She reaches for the necklace
tearing it from her flesh…”
“ Peering out through half-lidded eyes
she stares at the curved silver
wondering what it now means;
if it had ever meant anything at all”

I suppose silver infinity is the precious necklace of never fleeting love and it’s falling symbolizes the passing of the woman and/or the end or the beginning of the end for the lovers. Also the ambulance arriving too late could be her love coming back again but now in time or someone else tring to save her from her own destruction. I’m probably way off but I’d like to know what’s behind this poem…if you don’t mind explaining it.

”Silver infinity drops to the tiled floor
as the ambulance arrives too late”

Oh, thanks for the comment on my poem. It’s not a good poem but just wanted to get the point across to fight for what’s right and not with violence but with words of authority as well as not giving up. Love the poem. (sry this comment so large…never wrote so much on a comment page.) Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Take care,
Cheyanne

Yes, you're right on. The necklace was a gift; given with the promise of infinite love. The removal of it does symbolize the angry attempt to recover from the heartache, although unsuccessful. You did a very good job of analyzing my poem. Thank you for reading it in such an in-depth way. I hope that you enjoy the others!