I love it and I think it was an awesome thing to write....Trying to help a friend in such a way is honorable but he'll get on the right track when he's ready. It's hard but you can't change someone just like that. Give it time...he'll see…

I thought it was well put together and beautifully written although I thought you could have elaborated a little more about Grandma and what she wanted to pray for before she died but at any rate it was good.

I have just one question though…should ever be Never in
Bitterness nor sorrow,
Will ever be enough.

Nicely done! Take Care! 

Thank you very much.and your right never not ever.Thank you for your honesty Natalie.