hey love the poem, its great and well written, one of the best ive seen so far. And its the only one ive read that has two lines to a stanza, great effect. thanx for commenting on mine, appreciate it. if u got time could u please look at my mates poem and hopefulli give her some advice. http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=420691

Thankyou xxx Love Mark xxx

das a well kool poem,keep up da gd work lol

Thats well gd 5/5 keep it up! great poet you are! Plz comment and vote on some of mine x

thats a beautiful poem 5/5
peace, courtie

amazing..so simple and yet shows so much emotion....you have alot of potential...:p...keep it up ok?...i look forward to more:D

another good one i like your poems so far ima keep reading great job!!