this is my 1st suicide poem so it kinda sucks lol

Dude this poem sucked, your right!

J/K : )
That was "okay", i think you can write better. But I give u a 5/5 cause I like ya.

if that was ur first.. i think u will be an amazing writer. because that poem was very good. i cud feel the emotion as i read it.. and to make the reader feel that emotion is an amazing talent to have. great job.

-tan

great poem girly!!

Wow this is so intence, I can really relate to this sort of stuff..You're a very talented writer and i hope that whatever happends in life you keep writing.. goodluck with everything that life may through at you..xox