Woweee...this is...heart touchingness...*can't think of word*..It's beautiful. You're so amazing!! <3 Lovely job Ben..you really get to the writer and deliever your emotions so well and the emotions in your work are so strong and so powerful. You're an incredible poet...and you better not doubt that ever, cos you're just amazing. *hugs* i love you babe =) You're so brilliant <3 Wonderful work xxxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

hmm....very deep. leaves me thinking about things.....and as previous others have said, very touching! =) Peaces. //ari\\

wow man this is so well done its like telling a story and it is so true.
at the first stanza you just get stuck in and cant stop reading.
great job it was well "very touching" x)
keep it up.

it does leave you wondering things. very awesome! i loved it. it's deep. it touched my heart. it takes a lot to do that too. :) 5/5 keep it up!