Awwwww...that was very sweet. I really liked it. However, on line 3 of paragraph 2....shouldn't "of" be "off"

Great poem

~*~Christina~*~

Great poem! I give it a five nice flow! You are talented and should be proud! nice work =D

...someone's been getting action.. lolz

~*Christina*~

<<5>>

oh wow...hehe. the poem was great.

NICE I LOVED IT

omg!! eeecccckkk!! lovey dovey, that made me get shivers down my back, god the feeling of love, great poem!!!

Great poem! keep it up
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