wow ur poems r awesome
Kepp up the good work
<3

Dude . . . this is a very well written poem . . . great job.
thanks for the comment and you be happy to young man

Rachae

Dude . . . this is a very well written poem . . . great job.
thanks for the comment and you be happy to young man

Rachael

heyy , nice stuff you're a wIcKed trancendent writer keep it up and thanx for the comment
~HazE

hey, thanks for commenting on my poem. they really mean so much to me. this peom was very well written
and so sad.
wish you eternal happiness,
marjan

thnx 4 my comment nd ur poem is really kewl u a gr8 writa xx

Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Hey this is awesum! i really like how your writing! thanx for commenting on my stuff! ~love always~ Kelsey

5/5 definetly one of your best poems

Lovely poem
the rhyme scheme was interesting and the repetition worked well with the poem
well done

Lovely! i like the rhyme.
its nice reading more of ur poems
keep it up! good job
bharti

Hey, I think this poem is just fantastic.
I loved the way you wrote it. and the beginning and ending was just great.
and I liked this part the best:
I’m tired of everything being the same
The hopeless life
Living on the edge of the knife
Tired of playing this pointless game

you're really talented. don't stop
writing. looking forward to read more
of your poems.
take care,
marjan
P.S. and thanks for that comment.
It made me happy(better to say
happier because I was already happy)
thanks again.

Brilliant write. very powerful and relatable. some fantastic word play in this, such as this particular stanza:

"...I’m tired of my tears
Two tiring eyes
Sadness undisguised
Tired to afraid tired of fears..."

i can feel the despair within this piece, the emotion. fantastic write. very well done!

It touch my heart. I can't understand pain of this poem. I can't feel it.
5/5