Nice energy and emotions! I love it, again your style is wonderful.
but umm write out the number sixteen, it will make it flow better for the reader(at least this one)

"This is my call to arms. This is MY way of saying, “Hello Father, Welcome to the Hell you’ve caused!”
I guess you are welcomed for the ride as well…"
very moving lines, you pick your words out carfuly and make them fit prfectly. i love it. some things dont seem to flow just right, but I'm sure after you go back to it a few times, you'll find what you dont like.

As for this ryhme: IT IS NOT NEEDED! A POEM DOES NOT ALWAYS NEED TO RYHME! some of you people are just stupid! I mean take a gosh darn class! you need to learn what real poetry is!

again love the poem!
~Breeze

Erm, okay. No reason to be upset, I guess I should explain that I don't always like to rhyme or even read rhymes for that matter. To each their own.

yes but you dont need toeyhem to flow! FLOW! lol. sorry darling,had to argue!