Comments : Black Ribbon

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma Carnage

    ooo! i like how you ended this! i had no idea how you were gonna end it when you showed me how much you had. the part about the moose still makes me giggle immensely. i can just see you.. o dear.. i just snorted thinking about it. anyways. that's all. toods.

  • 18 years ago

    by lunachan

    thanks! the ending was originally gonna be something that was alot alot like the first stanza. i like the way it turned out too. and the moose...oh dear the moose.........

  • 18 years ago

    by eternal rest

    sweet ending! i totally didnt think it would be like that. the first many stanzas made me think that you were like... catish... lol. i love it.