wow, this is really incredible victoria.
I loved this poem specially its meaning. and it had a good flow too.
love you,
marjan
P.S. thanks for your lovely comment.

Amazing.. I love the flow and the point it brings across.. Very strong and meaningful.. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Victoria,

This poem immediately sent images of the various different bombings that recently occured across the globe ans created very vivid images for me. Very sad state of affairs.

regards,

Steve

Wonderful poem and i agree with you, When will this world now peace? Senseless murders and for what? Anyway great write and thanks very much for your comment!

Wow, wonderful write. Its a shame that people can not live in peace. This is a very powerful poem, great job.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela