Awwwww that is such a melancholy poem. It flows very well! The question that you had in stanza 3, line 2 makes it sound really good and adds a lot of feeling 2 the poem. The rhyming makes the poem flow even better and its good that you didnt make every line rhyme. Keep up the great job 5/5

5/5. keep it up.

PEACE~~

((pReTtY iN PiNk))

I really like this one. It wasn't a typical rhyming poem, but it went well. 5/5. Keep it up!
Thnx for the comment.

I love all of your poetry.
the ones i read anyways.
:))
this poem in by far my favorite though.
I dont know why, it just is.
dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
thanks love!

-jesss.
Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)

WOW'!
AMAZiNG POEM'
i'VE BEEN THERE BEFORE SO i KNOW HOW U FEEL....KEEP iT UP!
=)