Comments : Lost

  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    I think this poem is a litte incomplete.. I dosn't fully tell you the story...

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    lol yeah i read through it and realised its true!! i understand it but thats because its me who wrote it!! i'll get more done asap!

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I loved this one. It seems you're a great writer.
    love you so much,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by WasteOfSpace

    oh..im really hoping this poem isnt about me...coz ur my best friend... always

  • 18 years ago

    by WasteOfSpace

    oh...i really really hope this poem isnt about me.... your still MY best friend til the end no matter if im not to you...x

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    its not about you, Standing Strong is about you!

  • 18 years ago

    by L0KA

    I really liked this poem, but I think you it should be made longer. It has a great base but it can be further developed. However, I can totally relate. That is happening with one of my friends but we didn't end up being friends again. Good luck in your friendship and keep writing. Keep your head up. Peace.

  • 18 years ago

    by inlove

    thats sweet,
    that poem is how i felt.
    isnt it funny how some poems that other people have writen are exactly how you feel....
    great job!
    God Bless,
    always sam xo