hey well i know how u feel it happened to me to and i hope life does get better for u!God still cares!

oh dear thats really sad, i hope it hasnt affected the way you feel about yourself! great poem and thanks for commenting on mine!

How sad. So many people will be able to relate to this piece. Just having not had a father not necessarily the same situation you had.

You lost the rhyme scheme in a few places. No big deal though it would sound better if you fixed it...either way...just so that it's all the same.

Other than that I'd say pretty nice write! :) Take Care!! 5/5

wow awesome poem..quite sad though
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