Comments : Too deep~

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    wow this was a great poem! I really like reading yours and am adding you to my favorites:)

  • 18 years ago

    by natalie

    wow i really like that poem, i love the end two lines,

    i run to my room to stop the bleeding
    everyone who saw me was just never seeing

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Arora

    wow..... good poem..... 5/5 again... keep writing... <3 I like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! very sad poem. it made my wrist hurt lol. but awesome rhyming

  • 18 years ago

    by Jas

    i personaly know how you feel and i know it sux you can email me at jasamarroquin@yahoo.com

  • 18 years ago

    by nicole

    wow..very deep poem..your very good. keep writing..you have lots of talent.
    lots of love
    nikki*

  • 18 years ago

    by StormyWeather

    incredibly sad and really deep!
    although most poems lose their feel with forced rhyming, u just about pulled it off!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelsey

    that was great! i loved it. if ya need to talk you can email me anytime hunn. Kelscamie_10_29@yahoo.com. I can relate to what you are saying. keep it up. yet again. awesum poem!
    love-kelsey

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    So sorry about how sad you feel . You need to find a true friend that you can talk to .Your emotions are shouting out loud and clear . Keep up the writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Sakura Kimiko

    O.O wow! that one is a 6/5! I can SO relate!!

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    I'm not sure But I think this time I hit a vain - is VEIN not vain : )
    lovely poem
    gave u 5/5
    nice write
    enjoyed readin it
    love
    amy