Sweet poem. I think that the following stanza could use to either be erased completely or revised a little:

The silken white cloth is 100% cotton
Our feet are entwined right at rock bottom
Flattened pillows of polyester fiber
And the sheets came from somewhere, I can't remember,

That kind of threw me off a little. I don't think that it flows along with the rest of the poem. I like the poem though...it's very sweet. Proving he's worthy of such beautiful things shows what he means to you....like he's your king. That's the feeling I got while reading it. You painted a picture with this...Nicely done! :)

Very good....though i dont kno exactly what you are talking about...lol!