Hey thats really good keep it up. 5/5
Rene O.

great poem. im gonna add you to my favorites cuz i like your poems so much!

This one doesn't flow too well, and the repitition seems alittle off, however You put alot of emotion into this one.. Good Job.

this is really good....5/5
keep up the great work
luv ya,
LoVeAbLeShOrTie

very well written! (fyi i already ready your two new poems ^_^) it flowed nicely and was great! defianately worth the read 5/5