This was an excellent write, You really did a great job. This world is filled with many horrifying things...Keep Writing.

Thanks for reading my material.

Libby

hi. this poem is amazing. i know that god will always be there even if my poetry dosent show it. thanks for commenting on my poems and i wrote more so if youd like to read em'.
great poem by the way

thank you so much for the comment it made me so happy , i like how people are so nice about it , great wrok and 5/5 i enjoyed reading this , keep up your exellent work

Very nicely written. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

ok great poem very emotional and meanigfull
but never ever lose faith in God..he lets us cry etc..to make us stronger..and he wont ever put anythingin ur life that u cant handle

"no matter how hard it seems
if it came from above
It will end in love"

remember that

thnx
luv ya and thnc for all ya comments hunni
-angel-

Nice poem!
I really liked it, it was very creative.

You were born with the talent of writing poems.. i luv evry one.. keep writing

It i written that god will never leave us nor forsake us. he doesnt cause the pain and anguish we have. he doesnt cause our life to be hell. he may allow it to happen though. why? so that he may be glorified. so that people may see that without him, there is nothing. People dont think hes around because they have no faith.religon is all about faith. buddists, catholics, mormons, jehova witness' they all believe in a god they havent seen. so what do we do? sit back and let the world turn? i chose to believe there is a god. he died for our sins. but it isnt that he sees thoseof you who arent saved a bunch of sinners, but rather "lost sheep" for he is our shepard. but this is nothing to contridict what you say i appreciate all your poetry its beautiful. i just answer you in what is the truth nothing to embarress or humiliate. just healthy criticism. i love your work

Yup. I totally agree with this one because the world today seems as though there is no room for the simple concept of peace. It's sad to say but also true. So I guess my suggestion for others is to get to saving and sharing ur faith because time is ticking. Many are scared, sad, rebellious, hurt or whatever. They NEED to be saved! I was once told that if u have an opportunity to share w/ sumone who does not know Christ then their blood is in ur hands. I think it's about that time to wake up and realize the purpose of life. I dont mean to make it sound as if I'm preaching to u but I dig ur mindstate girl! stay leveled.
luv n light,
b