Comments : Someone Help Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Kendall

    Wow nice poem, it is very well written, and i can definately relate to most if not all of the poem. Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Heya,

    I loved the flow in this poem it just fitted well done :)

    It was very sad and deep but showed great feelings :)

    I enjoyed reading your poem :)

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by Illusion

    Very good poem. I can relate to this one...you wrote it very well...and I love the bit about wearing the mask.

    5/5

    DFK

  • 18 years ago

    by TeddyLove101

    Beautiful piece of work. Thanx for the comment and now I regret that I have not looked at your work befor. Love this poem but make sure if you need any kind of advice Ill talk to you. Much Love- Mario AKA TeddyLove101