lmao why thnku :P

lol its alot more funny then the other poems here 5/5

LMAO!!! 5/5 hmmm... i gta write a random poem...

ur a fkin nutcase :P

ha....ha....ha :P i ad a feelin ud do dat lol

it was boring. i didnt understand it at all. if your gonna write a poem, make sure you know how to write b4 u start scribbling.

hey shut up! dnt dis my m8s poem, she woz bored, n dno wot planet ur on, its woz well funny and ignore that nic, write wot u bloody want :@

aaw bless ya both,n yeh everyone has there own opinion n i respect dat but like the poem sed i was bored,i didnt care for it to make sence lol

well done nic! u got an award *thumbs up* lol memba u gta beat chazza :P

yaaaay

lol yeah very ncie and yeah who the hell cares if it was durning a borning time or and excting/dying time, as long as it's what counts for you and you like---Rachel