Amazing poem, descriptions were fantastic and the piece was well thought out and written, beautiful, well done to you

take care

love you

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hey lost girl, long time no talk!!! anyways i loved this poem, great work, 5/5, this was my favourite part

'Rumors go unnoticed by most, but still they are there
Like poison in the water, or a bad smell in the air
Hurting those that they affect, sting and scorch their heart
It maybe something you made up that tears them apart'

cya later!!
Luv Always
*Lucy*

This poem is so true. Great job!! I really especially like this part:

"It is always there behind you waiting to attack
Bullets aimed straight at you, knives stabbed in your back
Ever silently present, though no one says they know
None of them are honest but the signs always show"

It is so true. Great job writing it.

Again, another brilliant poem.
Keep going you are wonderful.
Scarlet xxxxxxxx