i liked that, its kinda sad but kinda sweet...
if u have time comment plz on my stuff
Luv Niki

i don't think you need to add that much to it. it's really good. just be like you thught he'd be there but you see him walking away and realize he was never there to stay or something like that.

much love and luck,
Britney

i think this poem is very good...you dont need to add much...just add something like if he was true to u he would have been there helpin u...somethin like that...please comment on my stufff...

it was reallie .. i guess u could add some stuff like how he said he'd always be there to help you and love you and always care but he just keeps walking .. like one day he just wanted to end it .. with no explaining ... just to leave u there hurting
Jess xoxox

Great poem (so far), I don't think u need to add much. Just put something like how he was here for you and then one day when u needed him the most, he never showed up. Keep up the good work......luv...mini

I feel the same way. absolutely. we're supposed to be "just friends" now but he doesn't even talk to me anymore. i try, and it's so hard because i still have all these feelings for him but he won't turn around and realize what he just lost. or at least, if he does, he doesn't show it. and i thought we were so in l.o.v.e.

amazing poem. it really captures my thoughts and its extremely creative. i don't think you should add anymore, it captures your "confused/lost" feeling. i know just how you feel. love itttt.

This is veryy good so far and i dont think you need to add much .. its amazing.. keep up the good workk
:)