Hey babes I luffed this poem!!! *Mwah* *Huggkes* <3 Elizabeth

HEY PPL IT WOULD BE AWSOME IF YOU GUYS COULD COMMENT ON MY POEMS AND TELL ME IF ITS GOODOR NOT!

hey, great poem, it was awesome.
thnx for commenting on mine.
- tan

great poem i give it a 10/5 i liked it that much

i like this poem..well done
i read this from a website sumwhere dunno where tho..but its cool i like
5/5

-angel-

THATS MINE!
youve just skipped a few lines out of it.

by Laura

Never say i love you, never say you care,
never talk about the feelings, that are never really there.
never hold my hands, if you're going to break my heart,
never say you are going to, if you don't plan to start.
never look into my eyes, if all you do is lie,
never say hello, if you really mean goodbye.
if you really mean forever, then say you will try
never say forever because forever makes me cry.
never say I'm everything, if I'm nothing at all,
never say you'll catch me, when i begin to fall.
never listen to what i say, if you won't love me back,
never shout a list at me, for all the things i lack.
never wipe away my tears, if you're the reason I'm crying,
never try and ever forget, to why my heart is dying.
never try and calm me, while you make me so mad,
why don't you just stop, and see why i am sad.
never try and understand, why I'm misunderstood
never even say you have, when you never ever could...'

THE ORIGINAL ON MY PAGE