wow thats so good! nice work and thanks for commenting on my poem!

i really liked this poem or story or what ever you perfer to call it.... but great job...and thanx for commenting on my poem it meant a lot to me so thanx and great job

that was so good!! i think u are great at writing poems!! i rally loved the end!! it was a really good twist. i really really liked it! good job! 5\5 tAyLoR

Hey!
That was a really good poem!u r great at writing stories!Keep it up!
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