that's an awsome poem with lots of emotion. i hope you don't do anything to hurt yourself, you're suck a great poet don't through it away when life can still get better, anyway that's an really great poemwritten and reads beautifully

Hey, you've written this with loads of emotion and it comes through when you read it, i like this poem alot it's really good.
Thanks for commenting on my poem, i really appreciate it.

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Wow hun i hope you dont hurt urself.TH epoem had such good emotion well done keep itup love your work

Ohh my i LOVE this poem!!ur #1
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