aww that's really good!! i dont think its bad!! good job!

awwww very sweet i loved it. 5/5

This would make a good song. My band would have liked it 3 months ago if we didn't turn from emo to screamo!

hey, thanx for the comments on mypoems, its much appreciated. I really like this, its ....i dunno, short and sweet, but really good. Thanx again
Ben