wow i liked this....
it has a flow to it....
it has.... whats that word.... sorry i just cant think of it....
but other then that this was a well writen poem..... and i enjoyed it.....
5'.....

U could put this in nature poems too..

ya i lost it...

someone sweeped both of the #s from my drawer and i dunno who .... but my mom stole my PHONECARD how evil of her! (this happened while i was vacationing in the philippines) but ya,nice to know you liked that nature poem I made... its so inspiring,it makes you want to dream...ya know? :)